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Lesson 10

TOPIK II Writing Expressions

Learn the essential connective expressions and essay structure patterns used in TOPIK II writing tasks.

The TOPIK II writing section is where most candidates lose points, and improvement requires structured practice rather than just more reading. The exam has four writing tasks: two short-answer items (about 50 words each), a 200–300 word descriptive piece, and a 600–700 word essay on a given prompt. The essay is the highest-stakes single task on the entire exam.

Key connective expressions for essays: 우선 (first), 또한 (additionally), 한편 (on the other hand), 그러나 (however, formal), 따라서 (therefore), 결과적으로 (as a result), 결론적으로 (in conclusion). The essay rewards clear three-part structure (introduction, body with three points, conclusion) more than sophisticated vocabulary or grammar. Practice template paragraphs for each structural section until you can produce them quickly under time pressure. Native-quality grammar matters less than clear logic — graders pass essays with minor errors but penalise vague or disorganised arguments.

서론 표현 (Introduction expressions)

TOPIK II essays follow 서론(intro) → 본론(body) → 결론(conclusion). Key intro phrases: '최근 ~에 대한 관심이 높아지고 있다' (Recently, interest in ~ is increasing) / '~은/는 현대 사회에서 중요한 문제로 떠오르고 있다' (~is emerging as an important issue in modern society)

최근 환경 오염에 대한 관심이 높아지고 있다.choegeun hwangyeong oyeome daehan gwanssimi nopajigo itdaRecently, interest in environmental pollution is increasing.
저출생 문제는 현대 사회에서 중요한 과제로 떠오르고 있다.jeochulsaeng munjeneun hyeondae sahoeseo jungyohan gwajero tteooreogo itdaThe low birth rate problem is emerging as an important challenge in modern society.

결론 표현 (Conclusion expressions)

Key conclusion phrases: '따라서 우리는 ~해야 한다' (Therefore, we must ~) / '이러한 문제를 해결하기 위해서는 ~ 것이 필요하다' (To solve such problems, it is necessary to ~) / '앞으로 ~는 것이 중요하다' (Going forward, it is important to ~)

따라서 우리는 환경 보호를 위해 적극적으로 노력해야 한다.ddaraseo urineun hwangyeong bohoreul wiehae jeokgeukjeogeuro noryeok aeya handaTherefore, we must actively make efforts to protect the environment.
앞으로 지속 가능한 발전을 추구하는 것이 중요하다.apeuro jisok ganeunghan baljeoneul chuguhaneun geosi jungyohadaGoing forward, it is important to pursue sustainable development.
따라서ddaraseotherefore / consequently
Examples수요가 급격히 줄었다. 따라서 생산량도 함께 감소했다.suyoga geupgyeoki jureossda ddaraseo saengsannyang do hamkke gamsohassdaDemand dropped sharply. Therefore, production also decreased.
또한ddo hanalso / furthermore / in addition
Examples규칙적인 운동은 건강에 좋다. 또한 스트레스 해소에도 효과적이다.gyuchikjeogin undongeun geongange jota ddo han seuteureseu haesoe do hyogwajeogidaRegular exercise is good for health. Furthermore, it is also effective for stress relief.
반면banmyeonon the other hand / whereas
Examples도시는 생활이 편리하다. 반면 자연환경이 부족하다는 단점이 있다.dosineun saenghwari pyeollida banmyeon jayeonhwangyeongi bujokadaneun danjeomi itdaCity life is convenient. On the other hand, there is the drawback that natural environment is lacking.
예를 들어yereul deureofor example
Examples재활용이 환경에 도움이 된다. 예를 들어 종이를 재활용하면 나무 벌목이 줄어든다.jaehwalyongi hwangyeonge dowumi doenda yereul deureo jongireul jaehwalyonghamyeon namu beollogi jureoedundaRecycling helps the environment. For example, recycling paper reduces tree logging.
이에 따라ie ddaraaccordingly / as a result of this
Examples인구가 고령화되었다. 이에 따라 노인 복지 제도의 중요성이 커졌다.inguga goryeonghwa doeeossda ie ddara noin bokji jedoui jungyoseoni keojyeossdaThe population has aged. Accordingly, the importance of elderly welfare systems has grown.
~라고 볼 수 있다rago bol su itdacan be seen as / can be considered
Examples이 현상은 현대 사회의 빠른 변화를 반영한다고 볼 수 있다.i hyeonsangeun hyeondae sahoeeui ppareun byeonhwareul banyeonghandago bol su itdaThis phenomenon can be seen as reflecting the rapid changes in modern society.

How It Works

TOPIK II writing is scored on structure as heavily as on content, and the expected structure is explicit: 서론 (introduction), 본론 (body), 결론 (conclusion). Graders look for that skeleton to be visible, which means signposting is not optional decoration.

The register is 한다체 or 습니다체, consistently applied. Writing the essay in 해요체 loses marks regardless of content quality, and mixing registers within one essay is penalised. This is the single most avoidable error in the section.

Introduction formulas establish the topic and its relevance: 최근 ~에 대한 관심이 높아지고 있다, ~은/는 현대 사회에서 중요한 문제로 떠오르고 있다. These are conventional rather than creative, and using them signals familiarity with the form.

Conclusion formulas restate and prescribe: 따라서 우리는 ~해야 한다, 이러한 문제를 해결하기 위해서는 ~것이 필요하다.

Body paragraphs need explicit connectors, and variety is scored. Learners who use 그리고 for every transition lose marks that 또한, 반면, 따라서, 그러나 and 한편 would have secured. Each has a specific logical function — addition, contrast, consequence — and using them accurately also makes the argument easier to follow.

The task also specifies a word count, and falling short is penalised directly.

Where You'll Hear It

The writing section carries substantial weight in the TOPIK II total, and it is where candidates most often lose the marks that separate level 4 from level 5.

The essay topics are drawn from the same social domains as the reading passages — education, environment, technology, work-life balance, ageing — so vocabulary preparation for reading transfers directly.

Because the structure is conventional and the topics are predictable, the section rewards preparation more than the reading section does. A candidate who has internalised the skeleton and a bank of connectors can produce a competent essay on an unfamiliar topic.

Handwriting matters in practical terms, since the test is written by hand and illegible answers cannot be credited. For learners who normally type Korean, writing by hand at speed is a distinct skill worth practising.

The shorter tasks that precede the essay — completing sentences and writing a short descriptive passage — are often underprepared because candidates focus on the essay. They are comparatively easy marks and deserve their own practice.

One honest note: a well-structured essay with modest vocabulary generally scores better than a vocabulary-rich essay with no visible structure.

Cultural & Language Note

TOPIK II writing is scored on structure as much as content, and graders expect a visible 서론-본론-결론 skeleton with explicit connectives marking each transition. Korean academic writing values signposting more than English does, so phrases like 따라서 and 이에 따라 are not filler — they are the structural markers the rubric looks for.

Common Mistakes to Avoid

Writing in 해요체 costs points — the task requires the plain written style (한다체) or 습니다체 consistently. Learners also overuse 그리고 as their only connector; the rubric rewards variety, so rotate through 또한, 반면, 따라서 rather than repeating one link word throughout.

How to Practice This Lesson

Memorise the skeleton before you write anything. Introduction formula, three body paragraphs with connectors, conclusion formula. Having the frame means you spend your thinking on content rather than on structure under time pressure.

Build a connector bank and use it deliberately. Write out 또한, 반면, 따라서, 그러나, 한편 with the logical function of each, and force yourself to use at least three different ones in every practice essay.

Write by hand, timed, on paper. Practising on a keyboard does not prepare you for the physical constraint, and candidates regularly run out of time because handwriting Korean at speed is slower than they expected.

Fix your register first. Choose 한다체 or 습니다체 and check every practice essay for consistency before looking at anything else. This is free marks.

Practise on past topics rather than invented ones, since the phrasing and scope of real prompts is distinctive.

Finally, get at least a few essays marked by someone competent. Self-assessment catches register and structure errors but rarely catches unnatural phrasing, which is exactly what separates the higher bands.